haunted house

lightning struck and Hit a haunted house.  Me and my friends went to check it out. All that we saw Start writing here:

On a Monday there was a storm going to hit us. with black “clouds’’  and lightning.

Suddenly   was a  creepy hallway.  We went in

Inside  we saw a cup on a table full with “horror.’’  Boom slammed the  door. Of the room one of my friend Night was  terrified. To death  but then wind was howling it was a  terrible Night.   

Then we saw a shadow it was enormous it was frightening? “slam’’ i  turned around

suddenly Night was gone “Nooooooooooo’’     i was nervous scared and cold

i wanted to go to my mum at home but all of the doors slammed i tried the windows but it

was jammed there was bugs getting on me  it was grouse and smelly. Then we saw a witch leading us to her trap. then my friend Sateki came with his boxing hand and bit him

up but nek minute it was a fake ha ha ha ha shame on your face said Mr S.             TO BE CONTINUED