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Wednesday, 21 October 2015

The missing cross

On Monday the first of November we had a
barbecue at the beach for a picnic with me my mum
my brothers and sisters. Then I looked at my mum then I saw this shiny golden thing hanging around her neck.

As I went up closer it was
a golden cross that shined in the sun. It was given to her from her great grandmother who died in the 1990s. It was a very special gift to her
she knew that I wanted it so bad so she gave it to me
and she told me not to lose it. It's very   important she said that it's a lucky charm. So I put  it on. and it looked pretty cool.

When I went
swimming I put my necklace on the bench.  I was
having so much fun. Then my mum called us all in to eat. I went and got changed and when I went to get my necklace on the bench. It was gone i was worried. So I quickly looked under the bench there was nothing there then I realized it was stolen so I ran and told my mum that I hid my    necklace away so no one can find out and steal it . She doesn't know and yes I lied and I still haven't found the person who stole my necklace.

To be continued




Friday, 18 September 2015

T.R.E.E. scructure




the structure we are using for our recount writing is the acronym TREE. TREE stands for
T itle  R eveal E vents E nding. this is the structure i am going to use for my recount writing.

Friday, 4 September 2015

All about metal detectors



I learned how metal detectors work.
back then people use metal detectors to find metal, coins, metal devices and
all sorts of things. in the olden days metal detectors were big they were heavy
and they were not working properly. The reason why soldiers use metal detectors
just to find bombs under the ground that people who  lives around the area is
very dangerous for them. Here is a presentation that i learned from it.